Nice composition and a good start. Couple of things: the line between her nose and bottom lip is a bit too straight...maybe a fuller upper lip? And the shadow for the scapula bones in the back are too straight across. If I can find a reference pose for that part of the body I'll send it to you. The desaturated colours you've used with the night sky work very well.
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