I think there needs to be a highlight on the outer portion of her right leg... something about it makes that leg look entirely too thick.... other than that I like this.

you're right. i think the whole leg needs to move over a little actually. and his parallel leg should look thicker. ya. i'll do that.

I don't know what you need to do to it, but it sure looks good already. It has lovely graceful lines. Very nice.

I really like the poses, and the composition is very pretty. The only thing I might do would be to make it a bit more defined, less blurry (although that is personal taste).

thank you. lot of detailing left.

The muscles on her arm are looking great *-* I can't waitt to see this done. :D