1. the beginning of the eyebrow should line up with the eye, and arch where the middle of the eye is, and end diagonal from the right corner of the eye, if that makes any sense.
2. you smushed the nose into the picture, which looks wierd. try studying some of the (good) anime noses on this site and try to get a feel for what they should look like.
3. the head isnt that much bigger that it should stretch that far away from the eye. try to cut the edhe of the head right next to the eye, then out a bit for the cheek.
but since you just want help on the eye... try not to make the eye too tall, you should try using more different shades of color that way it looks more dynamic and the more color you use the more the viewer gets drawn into the picture...i hope this helps :)
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2. you smushed the nose into the picture, which looks wierd. try studying some of the (good) anime noses on this site and try to get a feel for what they should look like.
3. the head isnt that much bigger that it should stretch that far away from the eye. try to cut the edhe of the head right next to the eye, then out a bit for the cheek.
but since you just want help on the eye... try not to make the eye too tall, you should try using more different shades of color that way it looks more dynamic and the more color you use the more the viewer gets drawn into the picture...i hope this helps :)