2draw.net - boards - Beginner - Smile attempt numero uno

nekodesu (Dec 6, 2005)

ya..First time drawing a smile with a lot of teeth x_x Something looks awkward and I can't decide whether it's the lips or the teeth.

Ref: http://www.veroniqueory.com/images/silver-smile.jpg

nekodesu (Dec 6, 2005)
drawn in 25 min

Shoebox (Dec 6, 2005)

Looking great but it looks like the teeth are off center with the mouth.. I think it's because the mouth looks like it's turned to the viewer more than the teeth...
XD oke.. I"m really bad at explaining things but; this was far better than my first try and anything slightly realistic, so keep up the good work!

kristine (edited Dec 6, 2005)

its the dip and right part of the upper lip, i think. i think it might not look wierd if the dip thing was a bit wider and the right part of the upper lip was up a bit more...or makeing the whole upper lip a tiny tad bit plumper might do the trick ;) i dont know :P

|edit| or what shoebox said :)

nekodesu (Dec 6, 2005)

Appreciate the crits guys! :D