Obviously it isn't done yet... the face is grotesque XD but my hand is kinda tired, so I'll let you guys pick at it's early versions.. maybe things will be easier to fix than when it's nearly finished XD
Yes, I plan to work more on the hands, and the face... and the hair.. and the shading will tighten up as it progresses..
I hope you don't touch the clothes...looks cool as it is
I know you're still working on it and you didn't ask for suggestions but....;)
I think the eyes are too far apart, making it look off, I think moving them closer together would make a huge difference
hm yeah..they actually were sketched closer together. and the hand is uber weird, but i have no suggestions other than perhaps replacing it with a hook? who needs hands. very lovely style tho.
XD I 've been moving that eye for ages, I know it still needs work, the nose looks so undefined for it..
I didn't work at all on that lower hand on this revision so yeah, lotsa work to be done there xD also the hair is all wrong.. it loks like her head is long and crooked..
I like the jeans, but I may fiddle with the sweater a bit; it's shading is to clumpy for my liking XD
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drawn in 1 hour 31 min
Yes, I plan to work more on the hands, and the face... and the hair.. and the shading will tighten up as it progresses..
Ref: http://www2.victoriassecret.com/images/prodlgvw/V252018.jpg
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*edit: and those jeans.
I know you're still working on it and you didn't ask for suggestions but....;)
I think the eyes are too far apart, making it look off, I think moving them closer together would make a huge difference
I didn't work at all on that lower hand on this revision so yeah, lotsa work to be done there xD also the hair is all wrong.. it loks like her head is long and crooked..
I like the jeans, but I may fiddle with the sweater a bit; it's shading is to clumpy for my liking XD
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