well, it's different

the flowers need more of a variation of light and dark to give them depth and dimension

Yeah, but I'm already over size for this board and I don't want to ask for more space.So it is what it is. I was just trying something different. Thanks

What were you trying? To create a watercolor effect? I love the blue in the window.

Yea , something of that order..Something more free or something.

Very Cool, thanks for all the great comments you've given me.

Very Nice x) I like the reflection in the window.

The only thing I don't like about it is the overall shittyness. So besides all that shittyness, it's almost not shitty, unless you were going for shitty. In which case, you nailed it... the shittyness.

I have some advice:
1) The ovals of the base of the flower pots are not in perspective. They should form proper ovals and never with sharp points at the sides...that will just insinuate that it looks like an "eye" which will in fact take away the depth of a true circle in perspective(in this case the flower pots). The one furthest to the left, is drawn better when it comes to this.
2) The compostition of the bottom of the pots in correlation to the lines of the wooden floor, is creating tension. I suggest that you move the line further down.

So far i kinda like it...i just feel it needs a bit more definition in some areas.
hope i could help :)
mx

Thanks mx..it's siding..not a floor.. but.. that's how it looks.. lol I have no space and don't plan to ask for more..this was just a fling into something a little different. Appreciate the advice.

hehe...i see now that its siding...it does kinda look like a floor...i guess because there are no real shadows insinuating either one. I am by no means trying to impose here or anything...But honest advice is a good thing so i hope im not offending when i do give advice

Not at all, I appreciate it. Thanks

I like that you had the 'courage' to stretch beyond your perfectness to try something new. You always rock in my eyes, poppa. I love the flowers, nice work.

I like the flowers!!!

I would of faded the wall into the focus. The white would of made this look awesome.
and maybe a little brown on the window frame to make It look old.

You have something good here but you weren't Consistent with It over the whole pic.