I like this but her top lips a little long her eyes are to close together and I dont like the kind of shirts you draw they dont make them look good or anything so Just draw a normal clothing.
I just think you should try drawing a different kind of shirt youve drawn the same basic shirt for each of your pictures and should try a different style. :)
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