hmm, well i think the hair and ears should eb moved in closer to the face a bit more, and that the eyes are too far apart. Also, both sides of the nose shouldn't be shaded, and there could be some more shading under the eyebrows. Its looking good though. I like the tree in the background.
yeah well..firstly..i wasnt really going for a realistic look..second, maybe her ears are longer than u think :P...3rd...well i wanted far apart eyes..face is kinda like someone i know..and with the shading thingy..i didnt really want to put in a light direction but then didnt want her to look flat..i kinda like how the nose turned out..i wanted a kinda clear but dull misty/faded look if that makes sense..
You should fill in the white behind the hair with a dark base color on a lower layer. Unless you added that white. In that case, I think the lighting should be a bit different on the face like hideyourface said. I know ye aren't done yet :D
But what do I know right >_>
the reason I said to move the hair and ears in is because it looks like the head is reallyyy wide. I didn't mean for you to make them shorter. And the nose looks nice, but I really cant see a natural situation where the shading would end up like that.
She looks more elvish then fairy-like. And yah, shading shouldn't matter that much. Iterpret it how you like, but it's really the artists decision. She created it! :D Anyways, great drawing, yes very minty ;)
*sigh* think i let this picture and some of the comments get to me too much...to be honest it made me completly go off drawing...i havent done a thing "arty" in 2 or so weeks which isnt like me..i..liked this picture when i 1st posted it but now i cant stand to look at it anymore...think i'll just set it as finished and leave well alone....guess i gotta dig up some confidence from somewhere before i draw something again lol..(something ive always lacked) grr...
i dont care what ne one else here thinks her eyes her lips her nose are better then ne think i ever could do and it got a pencil crayon feel to it , i find that unique here
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