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Lolli~Lime (Jul 30, 2005)
how do i deleteeeeeeeeee help me delete iiit harlieeee
Lolli~Lime (Jul 30, 2005)
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marini135 (Jul 30, 2005)
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Shoebox (edited Jul 30, 2005)
WEll, could use some general work.. little more shading.. blending of the hair strands... plus you forgot to ad the back of the hair, unless the back of herhead is bald ^^;

Background could be a little less defined, after all; one ones eyes focus on a close objects, theobjects behind it (I.E., the background) becomes blurry (Just don't good too overboard on the blur tool ^^)


A good thing to remember with this head angle is to make sure the farther eye is narrower than the closest one... it make it look a bit better *nods*
Hair could be a little less big, but that could be just your personal preferance, so, yesh XD


The expression is awful cute though, and I like her shirt design *nods*

(Though, she's a bit lopsided?)

Also, and I'm sorry to nag, but it's often polite to comment more on others pictures before you draw too many, plus it's a good plug for you ;)
I generally like to keep it to one picture per three comments... helps rack up points too, but remember not to spam ^^
Lolli~Lime (Aug 2, 2005)
thanks for the tips but i'm not a learner... i jus enjoy it! i cudnt care less if i missed her whole head off :D
Lolli~Lime (Mar 19, 2007)
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