Ahem. *cough*


I wrote some poems poorly
when I was hurting sorely
but now to my dismay
the hurt is gone
as is the wrong
but still the poems stay

nice.....

This poem is not a cool one
It was never supposed to be
I bet it makes you yawn
It sucks making these

:B

a poem does not have to rhyme
but it needs meter, beats in time
if your poems have no rhythm
please don't even bother with 'em

edit: oh... be, these... :P

yea, i agree, don’t bother with'em,
or i cant be bothered to listen,
i like my poems well written,
with good vocab, syllables, similes…

I suck at poems, this one is proof,
I have no rhyme, rhythm or spoof,
I can't form a beat,
So they end up like meat,
My only exception is this

:O

These poems and games
are all pretty good.
All my poems are lame
And noone understood.
My teachers were kind
And just smiled plus nod.
And right now you find
That I am one lame mod.

I sucked at poetry in English class. =/

It should be poetry week. *nodnod* :B

All these stupid poems suck,
they leave me thinking what the f***?
they must be more than just bad luck
these poems really suck.....

I never really liked poetry in the first place. I remember back in my senior year of high school, all we did in my English class was go over poems and analyze them. The classes seemed like they lasted for a decade or so. All our heads were down on our desks in snoozeville as the teacher would talk about them.

Gigandas, your poetry teacher es grandes foolio. I agree, snoozeville covered most of my lessons. I say, less theory, more practical.

I'm sitting here wondering why,
All of these poems make me wanna cry,
Glaring at my cat licking his own bum,
Where this thread came from I cannot place my thumb....

Nightmare seems not to like writing these,
How could he hate them so? Jeez!
But Hakkai's poem is so nicely done,
A story of poems, so nicely spun,
Gigandas' teachers must've really blown,
All their poems did was made him groan,
Asleap in snoozeville, may I add,
He must of hated poems really bad!!

Then, Renuar proves a powerful thought,
That poems are always better off taught,
Keep out of snoozeville please young Gig,
For if not, your own grave you shall dig.

Sephiroth, you are a rowdy fellow,
Your words and mind are far from mellow,
You eat all poems and barf them up,
Then call that a poem and say they suck.

Now I have discovered the source of this thread,
All flowing and dancing from Cap'n Zack's head,
Now I will end this annoying rhyme,
'Cause'yall break it down, 'S party time!

Bumbumbumbum DILLYDILLYIDLLDIYDOOOooO! Bumumumumumumumuuuu! WHOO!

Yours is my favourite Mr. Zach! >:D
|XOD|

as i browse the boards it's plain to see
that 2draw's not lacking (artistic'ly)
but it's with great sadness i 've also found
that ignorance, intolerance and rudeness abound

Damn Zach, that was quite interesting.

Lol. I try my hardest. Heh.

Hah, "young Gig" :P.

Yes. Older than me...... But you are still young?? Rhyming is hard......

Sephiroth, you are a rowdy fellow,
Your words and mind are far from mellow,
You eat all poems and barf them up,
Then call that a poem and say they suck.

lol

I noticed this topic and then I went 'click!'
Now what to my wondering eyes should appear:
Aww, Zack wrote a very cute Limerick! (not!)
How sweet. I have one right here.
I know it's kinda lame
I see it all the time
But I don't care; everyone else's is the same (lol)
Even I know that 'be' and 'these' don't rhyme
Not that anyone would really care
Most of these are creative
Especially yours Nightmare
Yet none of them really sound positive
What's so bad about poems?
It doesn't take a genius to write one
Who says you have to be like Sherlock Holmes?
This is no poetry contest--I don't see anybody yelling "yay! I won!"
You ever see a poem written by Einstein?
Is he really the greatest man alive?
Yes, I know, that was a really stupid line
Let's all just chill--and do the hand jive!
Ah, this is fun! All the random crud has begun!
This is just as good as "Hot Cross Buns!"
Sit back, relax and take a breather
Who started with the poem topic, I wonder?
You're already weeping & thinking, 'you call this a poem?'
Haha! Catch me if you can--I'm really from Rome!
"Oh brother" they say, "She's only making it rhyme."
Who cares? All I know is that it rhymes with "time."
We should have a poetry week!
For all I know is: I'm a poet, and I didn't even know it!
And let's see how many people can sound like a geek!
This is just great! Boy, I'm really "lovin' it!"

Zach a.k.a. rikku's is my favorite!
Here, have a cookie! Bon apetite!
lmao

Nice one, CP. The only thing I didn't like about it was the last line, but that is only because I despise McDonald's.

lmao yeah I hate that line too. Meh.

Woo! The mindless jabbering I typed out is loved! Theese come way too easy for me....

Aww. I want a cookie. Damnit. >:(

Oh nightmare you give me such a scare
If he eats the cookie why should you give a care
It probly came from cps hair! (:P)
Man i am really lame
For i am,... the one to blame
Now lets all stop this lil game
Now leave this fourm, the way you came

That took all my creativity
Im all out
Now leave b4 i start to shout!!!!

My english teacher was a bit**
I could have sworn she was a witch
Now i think ill have a sandwitch!!! XD

There once was this dude from Nantucket
He sat down and shat in a bucket
The shit was so thin that it reached to the chin,
Of that dude who came from Nantucket

Blah =P

Incorrect rhyming makes me want to cringe
And shoot myself with an infected syringe
When the beat and the time of the poem's amiss
I'm intrigued if the writer's brain does exist
If the poem itself just doesn't make sense
Their brain could be there, they just could be dense
But if all's written well, and it's easy to read
I feel satisfied, and my eyes to not bleed

I am a joke,
For it is the pipe I toke,
I'm a smelly hippie,
I hate rednecks!

You have just witnessed my genius!!!!

A great but fucked up song by the Misfits:

I got something to say
I killed your baby today
And it doesn't matter much to me
As long as it's dead
Well I got something to say
I raped your mother today
And it doesn't matter much to me
As long as she spread
Sweet lovely death
I am waiting for your breath
Come sweet death, one last caress
Go
Sweet lovely death
I am waiting for your breath
Come sweet death, one last caress
Well, I got something to say
I killed your baby today
And it doesn't matter much to me
As long as it's dead
Sweet lovely death
I am waiting for your breath
Come sweet death
One last caress
One last caress, sweet death
One last caress, sweet death

How tragic!

Doesn't Metallica sing that live Clox? I have a CD with them singing it.

Yeah, Metallica did a cover but the original "The Misfits" song is the best. I imagine hearing it in the late 1970s when it first came out made the straights cringe.

Lol. Yeah. The song hs a great sound to it though. Heh.

The song is actually pretty happy and up-beat, then you add the unique lyrics, it's pretty rocken.

:O I heard that on the indie show the other night and couldn't find out who performed it. Hurrah!

There always was the certain something
Between us that is
That certain something that made us reach out
Every time we got lost

I’ve been hurt way too much
To stand your clumsy touch.
Yet all I want to feel
Is you holding me
Making all this real
I know neither of us is ready
But if we don’t grasp the chance
Then this was just a short romance

Hold me tight
This might be our last night
I want to keep you in my sight
Just for my delight
I’ve been hurt too much
Think of me
And how you want me to be
Do you really want to see me broken?

There always was the certain something
Between us that is
That certain something that made us smile in the middle of the night
Grip out and hold tight

Did you noticed that like... none of the poems before you were serious?

Some People are crazy,
Some People are not,
My mind is getting hazy,
and My eyes are bloodshot.
All you see is poems now a days,
here on 2draw we have weird ways,
Everyone is weird,
Everyone is nice,
Some are feared,
Some sacrifice,
But none can compare to one fello,
Who started this all,
His name is Marcello.

Bleck.. look what it turned out to be.. a tribute thingy to Cello. God I'm screwed up.

That poem wasn't very long
But whatever; it was cute.
I wanna play you a song,
If only I had a flute.
I still think mine is betta!
Even though all you can say is whateva!

Ah, I better cut with the lame jokes.
Well, that's all folks!

my poem:

marcello tan,
he is a badger man
rahr.

cheese overload!!

cheese overload!!! wtf?
o well
thats swell
let gell
my dell
what the hell?
lol >:p

THE CHEESE POEM

cheese is good
cheese is great
Eat some cheese
with your mate
eat some cheese
with your cat
eat some cheese
forget you're fat
swiss, cheddar
they make it better
colby, jack
eat up the stack
if you eat cheese
your life will shine
now go fuck off
the cheese is mine!

There once was a man from Nantucket..
Whose..... oops nm..that's a limerick

lmao.

That bucket got away with you, Poppa.

Moose!

Moose are great,
Moose are grand,
Moose eats stuff out of my hand.
Moose are fat,
Moose are big,
Moose can do a little jig.
Moose are stinky,
They can't fit through a door,
Moose leave poopy on my floor.
I love moose,
Yes, Yes I do,
From head to tail, and even their nasty poo.

*bows*

Baby in a Hell

My eyes are red from crying,
My soul is like an empty well.
I listen to the sizzling frying
Of a Baby in a Hell.

Guts splatter on a tiny bed
As I weep silently inside my shell.
Who died without ever been fed?
It is a Baby in a Hell.

There is a Baby I want to cuddle,
A Baby that makes my brain swell,
A Baby butchered in its own cradle,
It is a Baby in a Hell.

A little Baby who passes away
Is a soul demons would never sell.
It never finds the spirit way,
It is a Baby in a Hell.

A Baby raped by an ocean of tentacles,
A Baby who emits a demonic smell,
A Baby branded by countless pentacles
Is a Baby in a Hell.

Who can stop the screams in my mind?
Who can raise an angel who fell?
Someone tell me how I can find
My own Baby in a Hell.

|XOD|

That's so messed up. lol

A Baby raped by an ocean of tentacles

Messed up.

I think that I shall never hear..
A poem lovely as a beer.
That stuff that Joe's bar has on tap
with golden base, and foamy cap..
Ah..poems are writ by fools I fear..
but only Beck's can make a beer.

Falling from the sky above,
Floating down, as elegant as a dove.
I watch it slowly fall to its doom,
I hide and watch from inside my room.
It nears the Earth, fast but slowly,
It makes you scream "HOLY MOLY!"

Here it comes to my dismay,
The Earth just had to end this way.
I tried to weep,
My my tears do not seep.
My doom is near,
My life so dear.

It's the way of life,
Pride and strife.
I cannot see,
Why it is to be,
It has to kill you and me.

Realizing what it is,
Thinking of what I did.
This world's gone nuts,
To spill it's guts,
To kill the simplest thing.

The boom is loud,
My ears start to ring.
The birds I hear, do not sing.

Nuclear warfare will soon come,
Don't believe me? KABOOM! You're dead, and then some.
The World's last days shall fade away,
When it comes, it'll be dark as day.

.................................................................i donno.

Mid July, blue sky, two eyes, one sigh,
many dreams, many favours, big...small,
minor or major, im the pencil, times the paper,
i take my time, koz there's no eraser.

Here I sit
In a misty vapor..
The guy before me
used all the paper.

I like to pee inside big pots,
So shut the heck up ya' litte snots,
Me likes to poo on moms roses,
While watching XOD make erotic poses!

Mary had a little watch
She swallowed it one day.
Now she's taking little pills
to pass the time away.

Mr. Zach seems to be naughty,
My nose is running and it is snotty.
I click to Zach's profile page,
And there I notice he's underage!
My thoughts for him are not impure,
For MJ's sickness, there is no cure.
>;)
|XOD|

very very nice Renuar.

When the time comes we'll be ready,
We'll pass off, thankfully, and steady.
All we need to confide,
Is a pencil and paper with an eraser on the side.

:D

Nuclear warfare will soon come,
Don't believe me? KABOOM! You're dead, and then some.

Okaaaaay then.

To draw, or not to draw?
I want to draw, 1 more, addiction?
Thats my dictum. My life is fact...
Made from fiction.

nice renuar
How iyou gotget lost:
In any case--in every--you'll find love.
For that's what's dear's bestowed us from above.
But I forgot after I left a boy
to please man and to please his evil ploy.

Roses are red
Violets are blue
My poems suck
And so do you!
=D

EDIT: This just in, some crazy person has just said the best poem i ever read, so good it made me orgasm in my pants.

IM A LATERN
IM A FANTA
I SHIT SONGS
IN MY HANDLE
ON THE MANTLE
I LOVE SANTA
I MISS GOD

At times there is a pressing need,
for our community to bleed;
loading a clip in my chrome piece,
I fear I cannot rest in peace;
those who truly deserve to die,
their dire poetry they should hide.


Argh, the semicolons!

Now Meth, to some, death is a terrible thing
Because the way you die could be terrible, grim
dim the lights, close your eyes, listen to life roaring,
While the elderly rest, the young play deaf, to deaths calling.

that sucked.

winter is icumen in..sing goddamn sing goddam (ee cummings)