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Minty_hippo (Jun 24, 2005)

Hope you all like it! Its suppose to be my friend scarlet (most clumsy one of my friends) and theres ruby just walking off ^^
I kinda done scarlets hair like sailor moon since she reminds me of her!

Minty_hippo (Jun 24, 2005)
drawn in 41 min

voodoobunny (Jun 24, 2005)

What are those spots in her hair?
And her eyes are too close to each other.

Minty_hippo (Jun 24, 2005)
drawn in 9 min

That look better?

Minty_hippo (Jun 24, 2005)
drawn in 10 min

There! I've done it :)

ILoveKenshin (Jun 24, 2005)

Try using thinner lines, so you can make more detail. Also, work on the shading. :3

Xodiak (Jun 24, 2005)

I like the figure in the background very much, hehe! Scarlet looks nice. >:D
|XOD|

Minty_hippo (Jun 25, 2005)

thanks....I will try to do that in the future