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Shenzi13 (Jun 23, 2005)

This isn't the best pic I've ever done, but I guess it's not the worst either huh?
The necklace she's wearing around her neck was givin to her by BeastBoy.
In case ya can't read it, it says "will love u 4evr"
I didn't have a lot of room on the chain, so I shortened it out... and the heart in the center has a black rose, and it's the symbol showing "love".
I didn't actualy write it.

Shenzi13 (Jun 23, 2005)
drawn in 1 hour 19 min

Shenzi13 (Aug 7, 2005)
drawn in 9 min

Okay...I think I'm finnished. If not and you see anything I need to work on, Coulda please point it out?
Thanx! Enjoy!

Childlike_Vampire (Aug 7, 2005)

Well, it looks like you could stay within the lines on her clothes, unless it's supposed to be seethrough-ish then nevermind. Also, this is a really great fkn start, why don't you give it shading and a few more details like that necklace. I really like the colors you used, and her boobs, lol.

Zack (Aug 7, 2005)

The lines need to be cleaned up (right now they're jagged and pixelated) and there currently is no shading whatsoever. If you decide not to shade it, you will need to significantly improve the lineart (including adding more lines for interest and depth, and using different line thicknesses) to bring this up to intermediate level quality. As it stands now, it is not intermediate level work.

Shenzi13 (Aug 11, 2005)

thanks man...I don't know how to clean it up after claiming it DONE though...I'll keep that in mind though.