Uhm..... I'm looking for a better word to say "no".

You need work and you over did the blush.

That is some severe nasal problems. I think she needs some Claratin.

it's probably all that cleavage collapsing her lungs. I don't know why, but this makes me want to say, "it's-a me-a, maaario!"

so yeah. might want to tone down that blush a bit. and use antialias when doing lineart.

Now that you make me think of it, she does look as if she were saying, ''I n-n-neeeeed C-c-c-c-laratin!!''

Lol!! Lol I will try n add a lil speech bubble sayin that XD
I will fix it :)