well...i'm no expert, but here are a few things...
1)the upper lip is almost -always- darker than the bottom one...you put too many light highlights on the top lip...
2)the actualy amount of 'lip' of the corners is small...you should extend the almost blackish shading in a thin line pretty much all the way to the corners
3) the placement of your main highlight on the bottom lip is prolly in a little too far...the highlight is where the light would hit it...and unless the light is coming from above, it would probably be a little closer to the outside edge...
4) in your reference, there is more curve to the top lip
that's all i can think of for now...hope i was helpful ><
Okay...thanks for the suggestions. And I'm not used to using references when I'm drawing so I tend to kind of make up things. ^^;; Anyways, I'll fix this later.
it sucks that they're using the old make-up trick of trying to make lips look even bigger by drawing the initial line outside the natural lip... I figure if you ain't angelina jolie, live wif it ^_^
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The only tip I can give is, think of the top and bottom lip as two seperate things.
1)the upper lip is almost -always- darker than the bottom one...you put too many light highlights on the top lip...
2)the actualy amount of 'lip' of the corners is small...you should extend the almost blackish shading in a thin line pretty much all the way to the corners
3) the placement of your main highlight on the bottom lip is prolly in a little too far...the highlight is where the light would hit it...and unless the light is coming from above, it would probably be a little closer to the outside edge...
4) in your reference, there is more curve to the top lip
that's all i can think of for now...hope i was helpful ><
it sucks that they're using the old make-up trick of trying to make lips look even bigger by drawing the initial line outside the natural lip... I figure if you ain't angelina jolie, live wif it ^_^
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