The facial features are fine, very anime/manga-ish. The background could be worked on a little but it's still good. You should have tried using the mask tool or layers for the lineart because it's covered up by the coloring and whatnot. She folds and curves in her clothes are very nice though, I can't ever get them right. I don't know what to tell you to name her.. Something exotic though.
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