It's a good arrangement of characters, and looking through the past versions I can see that you have some understanding of how faces are drawn, but I think you need to focus more on body proportions. For example, you've drawn them all with very small hands, something that's very common to do, but really their hands would naturally be 2-3 times those sizes at least, and the girl's thighs would also naturally be at least twice that length. I think your use of background was pretty good, since making it slightly blurred compared to the foreground makes it feel like it's further away nicely.