This is very good, you need to sharpen up the edges so that it pops out at you. Don't use so much blur, it feels like I cannot focus and I know my eyes aren't getting that old yet. :) Next time try to stay away from the blur tool so much, and your art will kick orz! All in all this is a very nice piccy. :)
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