I think you did pretty good. As I'm looking at it I see that looks like a faint blur of color all around her. Personally I tend to like colors to stay in the lines, most of the time, but otherwise it's looking fine to me.
well I figured it was since you put it around everything, but since it's so faint my eyes don't really pick it up at first and so it gives a slightly blurred look. Just saying.
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