Yeah...it does look blurry. Don't use the blur too.

yea i know...it does....sorry about that ...i'll keep that in mind

It looks pretty good considering this is your first intermediate post. All I suggest is not to use the blur tool for coloring, it's alright to smooth things out a bit, but is also easy to overdue. Try using more shades for light and dark/shadowing instead of the Burn and....whatever the other tool is. Also, you might want to try some layers so that you can color without the hazard of coloring over your lineart ^.^

Yea, too bad its so blurry. But don't feel bad, its easy to over use blur. Maybe you can try to give it more definition.