Pretty nice, but you might want to spend more time on your pictures..... (mods and the marcy don't like scribbles O_O;;)
^__^ hmm you don't mind if I give you some pointers, right? :\ (don't get offended please, i'm only trying to help)
well first of all, the left eye (eye on the right side) is a bit wonky...it looks like the eyeball is rolled to the side while the other eye is looking straight, the nose is a bit crooked, and noseholes are a tad too close together, resembling Orochimaru ~_~; the lineart could be cleaner and your use of screentone is a bit uhmm..plain? oh and, do you know how to use layers? o-o;; If you don't, memo me, and i'll explain. ^__^;
but you're doing pretty good for a second(?) oekaki.