At first I thought the clothes were too bright and intense since you don't normally see colors like that on people, but considering who the subject is I think it's fitting. I think maybe you should try to define the clothes a little more though by adding some darker lines within the clothing, like around where the seams are. Right now it looks good with the depth and modeling but the seams kind of fade away a bit.
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