(WARNING: SPOILER: IF YOU DON'T WANT THIS BOOK TO BE SPOILED THAN DON'T READ ON BUT IF YOU ARE WILLING TO HELP ME THAN PLEASE READ)

hey all!,

it ends up that my write up only got me up to 14 chapters, here is a short overview for the chapters i have so far:

1-Ark wakes up from a horrifying dream (which you only hear about throu his throughts he has in the morning)

2-Femaly voice is herd telling about a war

3-Ark stays home goes into a conversation with mother. mother tells him that she is going out for a while

4-female voice continues to tell about war

5-ark's mother is out and ark hears sounds (like creeking noises of doors and footsteps) he says to himself its not really happening (ends with him saying "this can't be real")

6-female voice begins to tell of the three clans

7-the power goes out in the house and all goes dark (its morning but he keeps all his blinds closed in his house) he feels light of foot and sees 2 reddish dots near his telivision walks towards the dots

8-female starts to talk about a family of 3 children with no parents one of the kids sould his sour to the devil

9-Ark continues towards the dots slowly still hearing the slight creek of footsteps even when he pauses. the dots vanish. Ark blinks and the lights are back on and he is standing in the middle of his living room doesn't feel light footed any more

10-female voice tells of the second child who was extreamly religious until an evil spirit entered his body and manipulated his every thought and action

11-ark looks out his window and is hardly able to keep his eyes open, he was in the dark for what felt like ages, hears a knock on the door

12-As the female voise starts to mention a third child the female blinks and wakes up to see that it is 3:16pm

13-the door opens and ark's mother walks in with groceries and asks why ark shut all the blinds, ark doesn't answer

14- back to the girl....


thats as far as i got in the overview. i have a few more ideas but not put in order yet.

i wrote the rough copy for chapters 1 through 8. mind you its a really really rough copy (meaning that there is absolutely no grammer and spelling is very bad)

i need a few more ideas =) if i use your ideas i will add your name to the back of my book where i will list all the people that helped make this book happen.

so if you have any ideas for what might happen next or later later on than post it and il see if i can use it (which 1/3 i might use {estimate)

thank you and your help will be greatly.... ummm whats that word im looking for? hmmm i forgot.......

O.o i forgot the description for the 2 main characters. well here i go:

Ark,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.=^ scaired of most everything has to power to see what others dont see while in dream state, not very social goes into a dream like trance where he still moves but can no longer see people just what the people dont see (ie: the riggers) he sometimes moves around while like this (parents call it "sleep walking")

Melika,,,,,,,,,.=^ Almost understands what is happening to her. she can see the past and what others cannot see while in dream state very bland personality not a social person, sleeps in really late, can only fall asleep at night or when very tired. learned to sleep in because she wished to see more of her "dreams" the female voice at the beginning is her deaming.

hmm...I'm no writer, but maybe ark should collapse, asleep. Later, when he wakes up, mother asks "what happened there? i was so worried!" or, "Ark, why does this keep happening? what's wrong?" And then Ark says..."I AM GOING ON AN EXTRAVAGANT ADVENTURE!! BE SURE TO FEED THE CAT!!" haha, just kidding, but the first part i was serious about. I dunno, like i said, I'm no writer.

ya thanks! i was thinking of some sort of coma thing but than that would take up to many chapters... after all this whole book (im hoping for at least 32 chapters) will only take place in 5 days time (for the characters in the book that is) but than that kinda restricted the things i could do O.o i might make it 10 days time.... but than tha'd be about 100 chapters long at the speed im writing it in O.o first 14 chapters only take up from 7am (about) to 4pm. but thats a great idea! it will be much shorter than a coma making it useable in my book! THANKS! *tries to find a good place in the book to add the idea too*

So what your saying is, the book is going to really boring? No girls, guns, or gore? bah!

with n e good book (or at least the ones i read) action starts from the middle and goes straight to the end... im thinking of making it a cliff hanger.... (as in the ending) and one of the main characters is a girl sheesh u musn't read! lol its more of a sychological thriller... the riggers are what actually kill people tho and stuff.... ummmm *watches the teacher pass by while lowering 2draw* crap i gotts start my work...............

Yep, Marcello is right... sychological