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bakuraiscool (Jan 2, 2005)
drawn in 24 min

pug106 (Jan 2, 2005)

i'm going to comment because you sound a little desperate,:-) i think it isn't too bad, only thing i would say is, the eye brow is a little close to the eye, other than that, not too bad, happy?:-)

bakuraiscool (Jan 2, 2005)

Yes...okay, I'll try to make it better...

taori (Jan 2, 2005)

There's a lot of things I really like about this picture. For one, you didn't leave the eye all one color- bravo! I'm always making that mistake. You'll probably want to work on eyelashes and eyebrows some more-- just look at some reference pictures to help you (I'm no good at them, or I'd give you some pointers). It seems like you went a little crazy with the blur tool in the colored part of the eye (iris? pupil? I don't know). Don't be afraid to define those little lines around the black part more. Again, reference pictures are fantastic. You're improving a lot, keep it up!

bakuraiscool (edited Jan 2, 2005)
drawn in 6 min

Uh...I think I screwed it up.
EDIT: Time to do more eyes...*sigh*