mazi (Dec 10, 2004)
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Maiko (Dec 10, 2004)
wow mucho sorries for not giving any c &c >_>; it's just too pretty :\
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seaanemone (Dec 10, 2004)
wow! this is very pretty! :D you did a really good job! :D
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staci (Dec 10, 2004)
hm..it looks like her forehead doesnt come out far enough or maybe the bridge of her nose should go in more, try shading further in on the right side of her face? i hate to give criticism without a way to fix it. but i like the flyaway hairs and the bun/ribbon :) very nice
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concannon (Dec 10, 2004)
I <3 the hair.
But yeah, as Staci said; bring in the bridge of the nose more. And I think that with the angle her head is turned, you should still be able to see (our left) her right corner of her mouth. Hrm. And I think maybe a teensy more of an ident between the curve below her lip and her chin. And make the indent that is actually in her (bottom) lip less...indented? Bottom lips are usually more of an arc, or a straight line, than they are a type of 'w' shape. ....and there's my two cents. |
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TaCO (edited Dec 10, 2004)
Proportions are off, but I still like It.
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sincity (Dec 10, 2004)
Hey you tried, and keep trying, it's good. If it's not your thing, then hey, Don't worry about it. :}
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staci (Dec 11, 2004)
she asked for c&c not a pat on the head :P
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TaCO (Dec 11, 2004)
c&c???? What Is c&c????
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Xodiak (Dec 11, 2004)
It means something among comment, constructive, critique, criticism, I have never really figured that out. >:)
I think you could watch some three quarter profiles. (is this how they call them?) Or watch how the eye is shaped when you watch it from a different angle. Its shape changes alot. http://www.sculpture-design.com/Joy_Mc_Quade.jpg http://www.katiec.com/webGallery/images/quarterProfileLeft01.gif |XOD| |
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Kaiser (Feb 20, 2005)
it says page cannot be found...
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mazi (Feb 21, 2005)
yeah i took it down long ago :P
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