ehhh... I have a few erm... Issues with this pic... The girl's torso is too small compared to the head and legs, the left arm is missing, the shading of the hair is messy, the shading in general is messy (you dont have a proper light source), both the girl's and the boy's necks are too thin, the girls mouth in too abnormal a shape, the poses are too stiff and undynamic, and the lines are uneven.... Sorry to rain on your parade, but this isnt intermediate quality <:(
I cant help that this picture is shitty <:P I'm just giving some suggestions for improvement... People make constructive critical comments all the time and noone bursts a gut like you just did... XD And you should have made a cleaner line towards where the arm should be to make it look better :P
XD ehh, seaanemone... dont get into this... I thought I was being helpful by giving you advice to fix the anatomy..... Is there anything wrong with that? :P cripes... youd think that I was a criminal for the reaction I just got :P
Hehe, I think the drawing is very nice. But I think Bumpinthenight only gave a few suggestions too. You are both nice. No need to fight! Make love, not war! (I do not mean to make love to each other, that would be too naughty!) >;)
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I don't even want to look at them >_> So I over reacted a little, but it makes me mad when people say things, and have to make things perfect, and they are not perfect. Maybe you could have just said: Cute picture, but it is a little disproportioned, and the lines are a little messed up.
:P That wouldnt have been useful information to you.... you wouldnt have any information as to how you could improve the drawing if I had said that... :P
And eurobeat, go play in the corner, child.
Really... I never see anyone look at my piece-of-crap drawings (I have the right to say that since they're mine) and say "OMG U n00b u fukin suk nevar dr4w 4g41n XD lol"
UGH both of you stop being immature
KENSHIN> constructive criticism is to HELP YOU, don't you want to improve your art? listen to people
Bumpinthenight> if you're going to give constructive criticism, please do it nicely, don't start cussing people out
NOW i don't want to hear "WELL THEY STARTED IT" GET ALONG, NOW dammit
Look, will you both PLEASE, shut up and sit in seperate corners??
EDIT: IF YOU TWO ARE GOING TO ARGUE, PLEASE STOP POSTING ON THIS PICTURE AND DO IT THROUGH MEMOS
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I agree with Mai. A good artist will always be able to take some crticism. However, a good critic will do it in a proper way. Meaning: Yes, point out the things that can be improved, but don't forget to point out the good things as well.
haha... At least mai realizes that what I said was actually constructive! But I must protest... I dont want to have to sit in a corner! I did enough of that as a child ^_^;;
seaanemone> no, i'm not mad at you o__o;;; *hughug* next time, don't get in the middle of an argument
Bumpinthenight> you don't have to sit in a corner if you behave
Kenshin> you too Sayo
No.... I had to refresh the page because my comp was dying (as it is apt to do), and so the comment I posted a while back was reposted word for word :P
davinci: hey! who says she won? >:| I think we tied, at best ;)
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That's constructive criticism if I ever saw it.
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Now we have to cuss to get our point across... hmm...
And eurobeat, go play in the corner, child.
KENSHIN> constructive criticism is to HELP YOU, don't you want to improve your art? listen to people
Bumpinthenight> if you're going to give constructive criticism, please do it nicely, don't start cussing people out
NOW i don't want to hear "WELL THEY STARTED IT" GET ALONG, NOW dammit
EDIT: IF YOU TWO ARE GOING TO ARGUE, PLEASE STOP POSTING ON THIS PICTURE AND DO IT THROUGH MEMOS
MY GOD
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Bumpinthenight> you don't have to sit in a corner if you behave
Kenshin> you too Sayo
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davinci: hey! who says she won? >:| I think we tied, at best ;)
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