I think you have a good start here. I like the apparent depth . The clouds should have their edges softened some,,and some wispy bits coming from them as they look a bit too solid as they are. I like this.
i think you're apsolutely correct. i will fix it one of these days. i still like the clouds though. even though they don't look like them lol i will change them so they look a little more... cloudish not... marshmellowish... MARSHMELLOWS ARE GOOD!! we had to pick up marshmellows with chop-stix in my beginners japanese class yesterday. hahaa it was so fun. anyway.. lol
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