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drawn in 1 hour 9 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
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monk (Sep 20, 2004)
this was inspired by one of kejocos pics and a pic i found on the web.didn't take me nearly this long, i was watching tv.
monk (Sep 20, 2004)
drawn in 1 hour 9 min
Shmoopy (Sep 21, 2004)
NO COMMENTS?!
Geezus! I think it's great, Monk. I love the light-colored skin. I swear, people really neglect what deserves to be commented on here. Some of the stuff can go without it, but it seems to me that... Nevermind.
monk (Sep 21, 2004)
thanks shmoopy, i'm pretty proud of this one and your comment is greatly appreciated.
kejoco (Sep 22, 2004)
Great job on the eye....
I still think you need to go back and add some darker shadows
Gigandas (edited Sep 22, 2004)
Looks good, and kejoco is right about the shading but that's not as important as how the eye looks like it has been dilated (Since it is the focus of this pic).Unless that is how you intended it to look, you could decrease the pupil size by almost a half.Some more reflective lights on the eye would make it look more interesting as well.Nice overall composition though.

-Btw, here's another tip on something most people don't bother to draw when drawing the eye.If you look closely at your eye in the mirror and observe the bottom of your eye where your lashes are, you'll notice a very thin lip of pink where the lashes actually grow out of.It'd be nice if you could hint at that when drawing the eye as well.
monk (Sep 23, 2004)
thanks for the advice guys but i'm gonna keep it the way it is. I like the exaggerated size of the pupil, thats why i did it, wasn't really worried about realism. as for the other advice, i'll keep it mind for future pics. thanks, peace out.
Iz (Nov 5, 2004)
cool ...like 1 trillion times better than mine...if i can draw like that i shoot myself....with water gun..XD...
Xodiak (edited Nov 5, 2004)
I like the pale ghost-like appearance of the face... it makes the eye stand out in the drawing. Fabulous artwork! <:)
|XOD|
davincipoppalag (Nov 5, 2004)
Hey..good job on this..I love the color you chose..
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