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eh (Aug 20, 2004)
drawn in 1 hour 42 min

damnskippytakn-a-break (Aug 20, 2004)

This is nice. I really like the way she's posed. Can't wait to see what's next.

Mipunai (Aug 20, 2004)

I like this so far, cant wait to see the finished version X3

Axil62 (Aug 20, 2004)

I think you're good. Keep doing people.

Anna (Aug 20, 2004)

hehe.. I agree with axil :)

davincipoppalag (Aug 20, 2004)

Some of you can do so much with so little. You only used 40.4kb to make this. I like this too. The technique you used on her hair worked really well, and it's so few lines. Very nice.

eh (Aug 21, 2004)
drawn in 50 min

eh (Aug 21, 2004)
drawn in 9 min

OH. the eyes are so much better just look at the difference. i meant to put a collar bone in but i'm kind of tired of this drawing. i like it though, don't get me wrong.

Pence (Aug 21, 2004)

i really like this, especially her face. but what's with her arm, Is that the shading?

eh (Aug 21, 2004)

her arm's bent so that's the shadow. i didn't really know how else to show it since i didn't plan on coloring her in. ehhhh.

Pence (Aug 21, 2004)

Oh okay, i get it.. if you ever revise it, i'd just make the shading a bit smaller

bumpinthenight (Aug 21, 2004)

I really like the face and hair, but the anatomy of the body is wrong... just look at the body of a female in a picture and try to copy it in order to get the proper sense of anatomy... :) good draw though!

eh (Aug 21, 2004)

hey bump can you be a bit more specific. i really am looking for criticism here because i am trying to get better, thank you, a lot, but what exactly do you think is wrong about her anatomy?

Aubrey (Aug 21, 2004)

This is really good, I don't see much wrong with the anatomy and the colors look really nice together.

Anna (Aug 21, 2004)

To say that the 'anatomy of the body is wrong', is wrong. eh, It looks pretty good to me. Nothin' major in there that you'd have to change. I love this kind of art.. looks so modern. Keep up the good work :)

eh (Aug 22, 2004)

a & a you two are so freakin' nice. i'm glad you're both around.

Jack_Fox (Aug 22, 2004)

This is really good work but I do have to agree with bumpinthenight: the anatomy is a little wierd. Her right arm and hand seem slightly disproportionate, it might just be the way you forshortened the arm but for some reason I don't think that's it. Also, her hand is too small and her neck looks just a little long (or is her neck really that long in real life?) Anyway, Loved the colors and the ideas; never stop! Peace, Jack

eh (Aug 22, 2004)

yeah that's the way her arm is shortened, it's bent. i don't know. you're right about the neck though. thanks.

bumpinthenight (Aug 23, 2004)

ooh... sorry for not coming to this earlier.... ummm, the shoulders need to be less loose and much more symetrical.... the bones in human shoulders dont quite go that bendy :)... also, it wouldve been better if you had done the shadows on the right (viewers left) shoulder using the burn function in lascaux (the dark blue circle underneath the light blue circle that is the dodge function)... using that function, you can select the opacity that you wish to use and even use a cell-shading style (with the rounded brush that has no fuzzy edges)... hope this helped... oh, it would also help if she had even a bit of a chest....

eh (Aug 24, 2004)

yeah i don't really get the burn or dodge tools ... the shoulders are like that because of the way she's leaning. and she doesn't have chest at all in real life sooooooo...