OoOh... I love the bg and the boy's hairtstyle and color, and you're quite good with shading ^_^. I also really like your lineart, although in some places it could be refined. Also, for the top of the head's shading (aka the white lines), I think you could've smoothed them out to make them look more natural, but how it is now does add a cool effect to the overall oekaki. Plus, I love how you hid the boy's eyes with the hair: gives him a rather rebellious look, hehe ^_^. Yet for me the picture may be a little too simple: it already looks great the way it is now, but I have this feeling that you could add more or intensify the whole picture... um... maybe shade the bg or draw the rest of the body? =P Great job though~
yeah this is cool... but ya know, and maybe I'm being a beast for mentioning it... but I can't take this "teh" instead of "the" much longer.... or maybe I'm just too old...
OKay i'll change teh to the and I might draw his body, but before i was tired of it so i didn't do the body. I'll do another version then. ^_^ thanks for the wonderful comments!
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