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~TaKeRu-San~ (Aug 14, 2004)
As I like to state the obvious, this is my second oekaki. It is named "Breezing Colors," because I wanted to experiment with colors, tones, and shadings in this pic: I also tried to make my lines thicker, and I succeeded overall, right? ^_- Like I stated an infinite number of times, I'm truly no good at the last skill mentioned above, and although the shadings in this work probably is more intense than my first one, it's still much in the beginner level. I constantly changed the colors of the hair and the visage, and I admit that the hair's multiple hues is somewhat messed up... if not utterly. *sweatdrops* And there is more shading to the face than you think: the colors are just blended too well. An interesting change, if I do say so myself. And before I used to think that it was a great talent being able to portray a realistic sky, but now that I have done it myself (always wanted to do it ^_^), it's not hard at all. Either that or I'm blinded by my egotism... hehe ^ ^;;. Please, if you can, give me some advice/pointers on how to improve my shading (or anything else actually), and I'll be eternally grateful. And this is a rather good pic, isn't it?

Last Note: I love the lips!! You don't know how long it took me to make it that beautiful!! >_<;;
~TaKeRu-San~ (Aug 14, 2004)
drawn in 35 min
I wish I could've done more to it, but sadly- I didn't have enough time. The nose stands out too much, the bangs need major improvement, the chin is too pointy, and the hair... is way too stiff. I'll come back to you later, ne?
~TaKeRu-San~ (Aug 14, 2004)
drawn in 27 min
*sigh* If only I had time to finish at least the girl's outline, this version wouldn't look half as bad as it looks now. *sniff*
~TaKeRu-San~ (Aug 14, 2004)
drawn in 34 min
Doesn't the hair look completely mutated? *viewers nod* Shut-up! *hides between curtains*
~TaKeRu-San~ (Aug 14, 2004)
drawn in 2 hours 2 min
This looks... not-so-terrible, I say? Um... but there is a lot that I can do to make it better. *ponders* Plus, I hate that yellowish color on the face, and because I ran out of space, I can't correct it! *cries* At least not now... *wonders off to plead to a moderator*
~TaKeRu-San~ (Aug 17, 2004)
drawn in 1 hour 46 min
This is now... FINI! Ladies, gentlemen, and germs... this is my creation! Doesn't the sky look realistic, huh? ^_^
Mipunai (Aug 17, 2004)
I like the eye, and the colors are pretty X3
Koneko-sama (Aug 17, 2004)
I think the head is a bit too short... and the chin pokes out too far... But I, too, love the lips! T'was a very good pic, Yang!
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