2draw.net - boards - Beginner - Cat for my sister

ironoxide_red (Aug 11, 2004)
drawn in 2 hours 12 min

davincipoppalag (Aug 11, 2004)

Great job on the leaves in the bushes! I like this

Ty854 (Aug 11, 2004)

I like the fur on the cat, he/she looks wet. Cool pic.

Kenshin (Aug 11, 2004)

Oh yes, I agree with you all. This is very nice. Your sister will love it! ^^

Pence (Aug 11, 2004)

KITTY! *pets* I think the fur on the cat is exceptional. I'm sure your sister will like it.

mx (edited Aug 12, 2004)

I think it should at least be in intermediate. (i think it has potential for going to the advanced...with work of course:) )
Maybe consider adding more light to the road around the cat and add more definition to the cat. Have a play between "dark - light - dark" In other words...dont have the same tonalities next to each other, especially with the vocal point(the cat).
Also get rid of the white in the top corners. It makes the painting feel very unlayered. It will seem much more finished if the white is gone:)

I likes

mx

Dragnakita (Aug 12, 2004)

Aww... I think that you have put this on the right board. The kitty cat is very cute. I think that you did a splendid job. I think that the bushes need a little help, though... more detail could have been added to them. The cat is really, really awesome, though. I also like the pavement. Overall great job.

ironoxide_red (Aug 12, 2004)

Oh, wait, I did put this on the Beginners board after all... Oh well.
MX: Good points, though I think the whites could work - with a bit more work!:) I know I cheated a bit there, all I can say in my defense is I concentrated on the cat since my sis doesn't really care about bushes...;) Though I have a feeling something is very wrong with the perspective and/or anatomy of the cat... just can't put my finger on it.

mx (Aug 24, 2004)

well...i like it in any case:)