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Knockoff (Jul 20, 2004)
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staci (Jul 21, 2004)

i like this
but ive seen you do better, more intricate skies.

quintessence (Jul 21, 2004)

The bottom buildings bit is really intricate and nifty, but I agree with Icats; the rest of the sky kinda takes away from it. I like the smoke, but not so much the cloud-ish things and the sun rays. Overall, though, very nice. Kinda Matrix-ish.

Knockoff (Jul 21, 2004)

Yes, I will agree. I put very simple clouds on this one. Personally I though it went well. Oh well, thanks you two.

Deformed (Jul 21, 2004)

Nice job KO!!! Aesome with the sky and smoke!!

davincipoppalag (Jul 21, 2004)

Yea KO I love the buildings,etal but the sky on this one isn't as good as your usual.

mazi (Jul 21, 2004)

yeah on the tutorial thread i made theres a good tutorial for clouds.
http://div.dyndns.org/EK/tutorial its on there.

Knockoff (Jul 21, 2004)

okay okay. I will try to re-do the clouds sometime today. *sigh*

emmamommalag (Jul 21, 2004)

I thought the clouds were supposed to be pollution from all the industry. Love the buildings! Great job, Knockoff.

Thear (Jul 21, 2004)

great one! ^^ love that sun there! =P
but...mby little more work to that sky? then it will be good enough to advanced! (my opinion) =)

longway (Jul 21, 2004)

oooo i like this!

Knockoff (Jul 21, 2004)

Thanks for the comments. I have decided to keep the clouds the way they are.

starmarked (Jul 22, 2004)

Neat factory scene Knockoff

Zack (Jul 22, 2004)

I don't think that the simplicity of the sky is the culprit so much as the composition. Right now each highlight and shadow is pretty much seperate from the others, giving the sky a patchwork effect. Each part feels static; they don't interact with each other or move your eye along a path of interest. Instead of working together to form a whole, the parts battle for attention. Gotta love that silhouette, though.

laurael (Jul 22, 2004)

Love all the building details...just awesomely done, KO! Also the way you've added those lighter colored ones in between...adds more dimension to this...it's great!

Knockoff (Aug 2, 2004)

Yes. Zack is a smart one, and he made everything understandable. I really do agree, zack.
I think there just to spaced out, and none conected.

sal (Aug 4, 2004)

cool pic ko... nice sillouett... (O)_o