2draw.net - boards - Beginner - The wannabe Cheerleader (before) <Unfinished>

PrettyPaintingArtist (Jun 12, 2004)
drawn in 31 min

Kloxboy (Jun 12, 2004)

Interesting piece, I don't hate it but I don't love it...hmmmm...yes. She'll be cracking out nob slobs on the football hero faster than you can say "Like, oh my gawwwd!" or "Like, repeat the question because I totally didn't hear you, I got my tampon stuck in my ear again"

PrettyPaintingArtist (Jun 12, 2004)

Thanx.............do you have any suggestions of how I can Make this a better piece?

Kloxboy (Jun 12, 2004)

Well, what style are you going for? What do you want this piece to say? What details are significant to the content of this piece, what needs to be conveyed here? From what you've got, I would give her a really thin body, like all you see is her upper torso, I would use some blues, maybe greens in her clothing to compliment the warm colors. Consider making more rectangular objects to break up the monotony of that big circle of a head. Maybe add some more contouring shades in her face. Also, consider adding a background.

bumpinthenight (Jun 12, 2004)

my suggestion is to not use cirles or rectangles at all in your drawing.... try to draw the shape of a face (at its simplest, a u with a pointed bottom.....) and go from there....

hieikurama (Jun 12, 2004)

Well, you could shade it, and maybe not use the shape tools so much... Cute pic tho. ^_^

Urei-sama (Jun 12, 2004)

looks like you did it on paint

PrettyPaintingArtist (Jun 12, 2004)
drawn in 1 hour 21 min