This is pretty... has an Oriental feeling to it. Next time, if you want to make something see-through, put it on an upper layer, draw it at a medium opacity and then put the eraser on a low opacity (like about 20 to 40 or so, depending on the opacity you painted with), and use it to minimize the thickness until it looks as sheer as you want. Works pretty well on the Lascaux for stuff like that.
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