Lmfao! I would be rude if I said no.. right? But I want to say no. Since I know you and everything. Oh well.. All I can say is that it could use a background and that the paws and neck look a bit odd. Another thing? It needs some shading.. But a Background is most important. Why? There are huge unfilled spaces in your picture. -_-;;
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Anyway, if you don't plan on finishing this drawing, it will be deleted...