don't hate it! its coool...ooo robot dude...^_^ its nicely done...thus far, and i'm sure it will continue to be considering that its you drawing it.
~WildMage
i think a little more definition in the chest would kick it uop another notch. also, if thats a tube going across his shoulder, the line that defines its inner edge going across his chest shouldn't meet the inner edge thats going towards his back. if its not a tube, its all good. sorry if that was confusing ^^;
he's really cool so far though! can't wait to see it done!
Yeah, I have a suggestion.... FINISH IT!! It looks good so far, I swear! Although I would suggest using smoother lines... but then I would be a hipocrit! ^.^; *put hand behind head* hehe... yeah..
good stuff but I agree with kenshin... also, some of the lineart should be cleaned up.... that would greatly improve the image... I love the eye though!
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~WildMage
he's really cool so far though! can't wait to see it done!
drawn in 13 min
mine mine mine mine mine mine *runs away with sexy robot-y guy*
*amused*