Scarfeh, don't you think you should lay down on the drawing? You've drawn 3 pics in the past 3 hours, none of which are over 30 minutes in length. Maybe if you focused all that time in one 1-hour pic?
This pic...well, her pose....she looks awkward, as if she has a backless dress and is turning her head waaaaay sideways to look at something. This would look better with some nice coloring and maybe a background.

I am going to color it,I just had to go.My brother did something to his arm...I used a reference picture...