Looks good (lot of edits!), the only thing that bugs me is the left hand there, at first I thought it was a right hand, but then I realize the index finger is just funky...
nice perspective on the bricks, and the blood in the cracks is a nice touch and looks pretty good (the large pool kinda looks like a red cape although it's not clear what was intended).
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nice perspective on the bricks, and the blood in the cracks is a nice touch and looks pretty good (the large pool kinda looks like a red cape although it's not clear what was intended).