The lines are way too thick, and the shading is no where near done but its just a marker :), I think I'll remove the lines and replace with absolute shading and tones to make it a lot more... pleasing? Me and the other half on my 18... it looks way too old to be me lmao, but it looks like marty <3 Ill finish when I get time, just got my new brief in university... boo hoo ;( EDIT: I rushed the background, did the first thing I thought of, doesnt really compliment the colours but oh welll, needed to make studio space