The arms are slightly too short, and she overall looks very stiff. The coloring could be cleaner, and some shading would be nice. Don't worry, you'll get better with practice.
*giggles* Hmm. Anger management Dangerous_punk?
Yes Gothic, do "Shout up"; T'is superior to shouting down. Typos are not cool.
But she (=gothic) is right, this could stand some improvement. Though the food is rather -vicious- looking, which is good.
Like I said on your other picture, shading is good, it makes a picture better, and more worthwhile.
Oekaki shi-painter has a wonderful tool called the Pen. Take advantage of its majestic line-art superpowers. K? ^_^
The food also has cute feet.
Also I would suggest, maybe, starting out with smaller images and then working your way up through the sizes. But you know, wh'ever.
Maybe I shouldn't mention this but, It doesn't seem like you are using layers, because with layers you wouldn't need that ugly white line next to the food/monster/thing. I won't explain layers because I'll mix it all up; it would be better for you to ask someone else ^_^;;
Also the breasts seem a little... freaky. That's really one heck of a bra she's got on and I would ask for a refund of the purchase price if I were her.
I'm also agreeing with RIKG. Deja vu. *shrugs* I've got a suspicious nature.
But I do applaud you for spending over half an hour on this. ... *applause*
*shuffles away with a cheery wave*
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Yes Gothic, do "Shout up"; T'is superior to shouting down. Typos are not cool.
But she (=gothic) is right, this could stand some improvement. Though the food is rather -vicious- looking, which is good.
Like I said on your other picture, shading is good, it makes a picture better, and more worthwhile.
Oekaki shi-painter has a wonderful tool called the Pen. Take advantage of its majestic line-art superpowers. K? ^_^
The food also has cute feet.
Also I would suggest, maybe, starting out with smaller images and then working your way up through the sizes. But you know, wh'ever.
Maybe I shouldn't mention this but, It doesn't seem like you are using layers, because with layers you wouldn't need that ugly white line next to the food/monster/thing. I won't explain layers because I'll mix it all up; it would be better for you to ask someone else ^_^;;
Also the breasts seem a little... freaky. That's really one heck of a bra she's got on and I would ask for a refund of the purchase price if I were her.
I'm also agreeing with RIKG. Deja vu. *shrugs* I've got a suspicious nature.
But I do applaud you for spending over half an hour on this. ... *applause*
*shuffles away with a cheery wave*