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lynnandcharlie (edited Mar 8, 2010)
drawn in 6 hours 29 min

I thought I would try something different for me, I have never done a nude before except for the little man with the cowboy boots so please feel free to critic it

lynnandcharlie (Mar 8, 2010)
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lynnandcharlie (Mar 8, 2010)
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lynnandcharlie (Mar 8, 2010)
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lynnandcharlie (Mar 8, 2010)
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lynnandcharlie (Mar 8, 2010)
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lynnandcharlie (Mar 8, 2010)
drawn in 16 min

davincipoppalag (Mar 9, 2010)

Its pretty but something seems off in how her neck and head relate to her shoulders and chest

elly (Mar 9, 2010)

I think her boobs are too far to her right..like her left boob is more in the center of her chest than to the side...there's room there to give her a third boob and make her an alien tho! LOL!! Beautiful job on her face =)

backmagicwoman (Mar 9, 2010)

her nipples look like delicious chocolate covered rasins..

lynnandcharlie (Mar 9, 2010)
drawn in 1 hour 21 min

I sent her in for a boob job, I hope this looks better, thank you very much for your comments

lynnandcharlie (Mar 9, 2010)
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lynnandcharlie (Mar 9, 2010)
drawn in 2 min

elly (Mar 9, 2010)

Yes, much better placement...I'm still drawn to her lovely face =) You did such a good job on it! =)

lynnandcharlie (edited Mar 9, 2010)

thank you Elly and David, I changed the shoulders as well, please let me know if that does it

lynnandcharlie (Mar 9, 2010)
drawn in 39 min

lynnandcharlie (Mar 9, 2010)
drawn in 4 min

davincipoppalag (Mar 9, 2010)

yep much better!

lynnandcharlie (Mar 9, 2010)

I appreciate the help from both of you

firecracker (Mar 9, 2010)

I think she has a very pretty face.....nice draw.....:)

lynnandcharlie (Mar 9, 2010)
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bette_davis_eyes (Mar 10, 2010)

that face is really lovely and the colors are great.. but if you can soften the lines around the nipples and use a darker flesh tone to outline them, they would look more natural.

lynnandcharlie (Mar 10, 2010)

thanks BDE, I knew I didn't like the way they looked but did not know how to fix them

lynnandcharlie (Mar 10, 2010)
drawn in 26 min

looks better, thanks

lynnandcharlie (May 10, 2010)
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