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SamiJ1000 (May 20, 2009)
drawn in 1 hour 48 min

SamiJ1000 (May 20, 2009)
drawn in 29 min

SamiJ1000 (May 20, 2009)
drawn in 19 min

The bg looks terrible! (above the bridge)
I don't know what to do! D:

firecracker (May 20, 2009)

I really like that bridge.....:)

SamiJ1000 (May 20, 2009)

Thank you! ^_^

SPfan-96 (May 21, 2009)

that brige is wonderful and the girl really looks scary ^-^

firecracker (edited May 21, 2009)

Maybe you could make the background real "misty" looking.....like the girl is walking thru "fog", or something like that. It would give the "pic" a mysterious look. I really love that bridge though. I think if you darken the sky a little bit, and add some misty looking "fog".....the glow from the moon would show up better.....and it would really "set" this pic off.

xiau (edited May 21, 2009)

I think a darker color scheme would suit it well, and maybe use more washed out colors for the girl to give her a ghostly feel (transparency would help achieve this effect, too.) The coloring is also out of the lines in a few places, and the shading could stand a bit of a clean up.

But don't be discouraged! This is a great effort, and I'd love to see how it could be improved on :)

SamiJ1000 (May 21, 2009)
drawn in 16 min

enjoydotcom (May 22, 2009)

I do love the bridge and riverbank. Also the stuffed bear is sweet. I do think however her left, our right cheek is a tad lopsided. And everything but the bottom of the bridge and a little white spot in the river is neatly colored within the lines.
Other than that good effort.