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i like that the lighting gets brighter towards the mouth of the cave; you clearly took into consideration the kind of shadows you'd get from this point of view in a cave like that. you might want to try blending the colors for a smoother transition between shades, and going for sharper outlines since frankly, the whole blurriness thing is making my eyes cross. still, it's a nice start. welcome to 2draw, by the way.

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Sex & Violence

kejoco (Aug 4, 2005)

Masuimi Max doing her best Lara Coft impression

Still needs a little work, especially on the right hand and gun

11 comments – latest 4:

davincipoppalag (Aug 4, 2005)

It looks better to me kejo...

Anna (Aug 4, 2005)

woowoo! This is great! I love her collarbone area, it's nicely done! *high fives Kejo*

taori (Aug 5, 2005)

masuimi max is my hero. well, not really, but she does have sweet tattoos. nice picture. i like the way the shirt looks especially.

Cianteed (Aug 6, 2005)

Stoen Temple Pilots have a song called Sex and Violence. Mmm... Scott Weiland.

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Mmm. Tristam.

Garnet (May 30, 2005)

I drew Tibor in color, I figured Tristam only deserved the same. Here he is :)

5 comments – latest 4:

wingz38 (May 31, 2005)

This is a very lovely image. The choice in colors is very nice.

taori (Jun 1, 2005)

ha! i love it when people can do lineart like that, with the really thin pencil and whatnot, and make it look right. i sure can't. but it's fun as hell to look at.

Juni_gatsu (Jun 1, 2005)

eeeeee! hip bones...soooo sexy! ^_^
<_<
>_>
*grabs picture and runs away with it*

oikitsumaru (Aug 5, 2005)

eeeeeeeeee!!! CAN I KEEP HIM?! CanIcanIcanIPWEASE?!?! haha, this is really awsome. I bow down to your skills.

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What lies under

Knockoff (Jul 23, 2005)

Well, first, I'm proud of this one. It combines several of my styles into one.

Secondly, enough with the shitty comments. If you comment, comment on the picture, please.

36 comments – latest 4:

Kenshin (edited Aug 1, 2005)

Great picture. I love the lips and her expression.
The background is different from the rest of the picture and that makes it cool XD

DinoFlorist (Aug 1, 2005)

I would say nice things about this, because there are a lot of nice things that you've done. However, when you only focus on other people's negative work (with the exception of the few people you think are too cool to critique), it makes it harder to do that. This picture could be a lot better if you made the transition from the waxy girl a little more consistant. I think you quit on it, which is easy to do. Good job on the nostril and the lips, but the bridge of the nose is weird and the eyes look like the skin is peeling off of it. Of course, it was supposed to be that way @_@! With more practice, maybe you yourself can be in that small group of people that you won't harass. There are degrees of crappiness and your standards are too high. And, there are degrees of tactfulness, and your standards are too low.

starmarked (Aug 1, 2005)

Okay....I just read all of that ^ and I am halfway confused because I think some comments have been deleted/removed. So KO I just want to tell you that I only visit 2draw to look at everyone's contributions and I comment on those that amaze me or those that I feel I can help out with my comment. I ignore and skip over all of the other mess/gossip/in the end just words that have nothing to do with art. This way I "protect" myself from becoming so upset about the latest topics taking place here. That enables me to continue visiting this site.

Now on to the more important thing, KO this is an amazing drawing! When I first saw it and that you drew it, I was soooo proud at how your skills have grown. Her nose, lips, chin, and cheeks are excellent! I like the extra bit of pink/purplish color you have added there. And the teeth add nice detail to her expression (which I also love). The outline of the eyes is not just right, and her eyebrows don�t quite fit the rest of the face. I also think that more emphasis would have been put on her expression and face if you made all of her hair black (or leave only a very few highlights) and remove the partial ear. Make the viewer wonder what is this girl looking at that is causing her to have this facial expression.

I am glad you incorporated your different style in the background. This will be one of those drawings that I think about and have to go back to look at it again. Thanks Knockoff :D

Gigge (Aug 5, 2005)

Welcome back, knockoff. I like the mix of styles.

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A slice of heaven

TheCrimsonKing and Xodiak (May 6, 2005)

Gore

24 comments – latest 4:

Shenzi13 (Jun 14, 2005)

I LOVE IT!!! Nice Gory Details.
How did the dude DIE??!!
Fun.
I seriously love the detail though.
KEEP IT UP! ^W^

Nightmare (Jun 16, 2005)

Are those..ants?!?

Maxster (Jul 26, 2005)

this is by far the......THE COOLEST FREAKIN DRAWING EVER!!!
YEAH!
ok mabey not ever but still awsome you have my respect xod.

Resh (Aug 3, 2005)

Dude must have had diabetes.

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i'm all outta love

taori (Aug 1, 2005)

i'm so lost without you...

i am aware of all this picture's flaws. i am aware that it is messily drawn, carelessly colored, and without a background. and i think it's, like, the coolest thing i've ever done.

4 comments – latest 4:

Split (Aug 2, 2005)

i think its really nice but the nose is a little to long,the girls nose. i like the girls body nice

taori (Aug 2, 2005)

it's meant to be like that. sort of a doonesbury thing. but thank you.

joe (Aug 2, 2005)

is the boy ment to be sponge bob

Xodiak (Aug 2, 2005)

Very nice drawing! I like how you drew SongeBob! Hehe! <:p
|XOD|

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haunted

dixielandcutie (Jan 23, 2005)

i cant believe they made it a movie...referenced from several movie photos

14 comments – latest 4:

dixielandcutie (Jan 23, 2005)
drawn in 1 hour 1 min

hair is not cooperating...

sing once again with me, our strange duet...my power over you grows stronger yet...

sincity (Feb 7, 2005)

I hate bloody musicals. do love the original phantom of the opera though. :}>

Aubrey (Feb 14, 2005)

Very nice. It'll be super when yer done :)

fleeting_memory (Jul 31, 2005)

EEP! How did I miss this? Oh well better late than never. I have to say I prefer Michael Crawford myself but this is a very nice rendition of the movie guy. His nose on the mask side seems a little uneven and the rose is a little flat but you're not done and I'm sure you know that. Very awesome dixie!

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HELLO,

fuziwara (Jul 8, 2003)

HELLO.
I'm japanese.I'm sorry,I cannot understand English so much.I like drawing a picture.I can draw a picture here and think that I am glad.

29 comments – latest 4:

Lottie (Aug 8, 2004)

how do you know how to use fullstops lmao you 'could' be a jap but some fakes for the fun of it :P anyway its a nice pic seen them onfront of some manga books in shops but its pretty

Anna (Aug 8, 2004)

Do us a favor and unplug your keyboard. Quick. You are just plain rude, Lottie.

xiau (Jul 17, 2005)

Yeah, Lottie, how would you know if she was faking it?
Well, I love your artwork, Fuziwara! I love the facial expression! She's just too pretty!

fuziwara (Jul 27, 2005)

Thank you for the comment. ^^
>Lottie,
The meaning of 'Fullstops lmao', 'P anyway its a(P? a?)', and 'Onfront' cannot be translated.
I'm sorry that the meaning that you say is good and it is not possible to understand.
However, it apologizes if I offended you.

>Anna,xiau,
Thank you for your kind,and,Thank you for answering instead of me.
I want to come to be able to understand English even a little! ^_^