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joe_shmo (May 24, 2004)

this is a picture, ideas like the scarf from a charactor on naruto, im not done. but its been a long while since i have submitted something, and this is much better than all i have done before.

Note: it is hopefully going to be intermediate quality soon, but i need the space to be able to edit it.

please c&c (whatever that means)

actual time 30-40 mins (i had to eat icecream)

joe_shmo (May 27, 2004)
drawn in 11 min

I'm done with this, I hope I didn't kill it.

Knockoff (May 28, 2004)

Hmmm its pretty good. I like the coloring, the background is cool too.
A few pointer.
Make your lineart a little smoother. (less scratchy)
Little more shading (its still good)
The lighting (source) on the hair isn't the same as the body and face. So you need to change that too.
Still good though.

joe_shmo (May 29, 2004)

yeah, i noticed that on the hair, and i just took asthma meds so i was sooooo shakey. Haha but what can you do. ill work on those, thanks Knock

Kenshin (Jun 10, 2005)

I like the scratchy lineart on this picture @.@