looks good... however, the lips of the black-haired girl could use some adjustment.... they seem too rounded on the top, and therefore need some indentation to give them a better shape.... also, the right (viewer's left) cheekbone of the blonde vampire should be a tad bit fuller... it seems to be too thin to me...
nice draw, dba!
drawn in 7 hours 41 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
nice draw, dba!