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doodledaniel (Jul 20, 2007)

constructive critisism is appreciated

2 comments – latest 2:

Nightmare (Jul 20, 2007)

Use blend, not blur. Also darks before lights, and focal point etc.

Too lazy to give any /real/ crits.

davincipoppalag (Jul 20, 2007)

There is a gradient tool in lascaux that you could use to set that blue water with ,,it's a box shaped thingy and you start on the edge and slowly move across the canvass and you will see what it does....takes a littel getting used to. Take a look at the tutorial in the wiki to see how to use the blend function..or look in the forums ..that last one about lascaux v/s shi painter has some stuff marcello put about blend

Ferrari 599

doodledaniel (May 26, 2007)

reference image from : http://www.supercars.net/cars/3818.html

3 comments – latest 4:

doodledaniel (Jun 2, 2007)
drawn in 9 min

its getting better :)

davincipoppalag (Jun 2, 2007)

Yea..it's coming along.. try not to use the blur tool much.. it overdoes stuff..like in the rims...looks good so far

doodledaniel (Jun 3, 2007)
drawn in 3 min

any suggestions?

Kayos (Jul 16, 2007)

3 things I think will make this stand out even more and make it more realistial. 1. on the wheels.. do a strong highlight on the bottom outer ring of the light grey part and the darker grey triangles.. maby darken them and darken the top part of it even more.
2. On the rear fender.. maby add a slight highligh on top of it right under the window piece and on the door darken just slightly where the fender sticks out on the side just a bit. It will make it more 3d looking I think.
3. The back end.. maby raise it just a bit.. and the red part it looks almost awkard slanted with the grey part. If you made the red part straiter up and down and left the grey that slant, and raise the rear spoiler up a bit more i think it will work great.
You have a great start so far and I know how hard it is to make cars look real. Trust me I have done many vehicals. :)