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Shenzi13 (Aug 7, 2005)
I still need to clean this up a bit I know...But Still like how it came out.
Yes...I'm A big BB/Rae shipper. Hope ya like it!^^
10 comments – latest 4:
hideyourface (Aug 12, 2005)
I think its beginner just because of the pencil used with the blurry stuff, and a lot of the limbs are drawn with the line, and there isn't much shading, and the anatomy isn't quite right yet.
Shenzi13 (Aug 13, 2005)
Very Funny man...
And thanks memo!^^
Where have you seen the pairings?
I hear they're becoming more recent as well.
deleted34235 (Aug 19, 2005)
I love Raven's hair...I also love the background!!! nice drawing!!!!!
Shenzi13 (Sep 3, 2005)
Thanks dudes!^^
Thankies to all!
drawn in 1 hour 52 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Shenzi13 (Jun 23, 2005)
This isn't the best pic I've ever done, but I guess it's not the worst either huh?
The necklace she's wearing around her neck was givin to her by BeastBoy.
In case ya can't read it, it says "will love u 4evr"
I didn't have a lot of room on the chain, so I shortened it out... and the heart in the center has a black rose, and it's the symbol showing "love".
I didn't actualy write it.
3 comments – latest 4:
Shenzi13 (Aug 7, 2005)
drawn in 9 min
Okay...I think I'm finnished. If not and you see anything I need to work on, Coulda please point it out?
Thanx! Enjoy!
Childlike_Vampire (Aug 7, 2005)
Well, it looks like you could stay within the lines on her clothes, unless it's supposed to be seethrough-ish then nevermind. Also, this is a really great fkn start, why don't you give it shading and a few more details like that necklace. I really like the colors you used, and her boobs, lol.
Zack (Aug 7, 2005)
The lines need to be cleaned up (right now they're jagged and pixelated) and there currently is no shading whatsoever. If you decide not to shade it, you will need to significantly improve the lineart (including adding more lines for interest and depth, and using different line thicknesses) to bring this up to intermediate level quality. As it stands now, it is not intermediate level work.
Shenzi13 (Aug 11, 2005)
thanks man...I don't know how to clean it up after claiming it DONE though...I'll keep that in mind though.
drawn in 1 hour 28 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Shenzi13 (Jun 30, 2005)
I hate the Background,but i love the body effects...
I had a little trouble with it, But now i just figured out
how to the layer effect!! YAAAAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!
6 comments – latest 4:
Zack (Jul 1, 2005)
In this case hide was giving an honest critique, which has nothing to do with how 'kind' he is. The proportions in this picture are off. If you ask me, though, the overuse of the straight line tool is a bigger problem. People, especially women, are curvy.
Shenzi13 (Aug 7, 2005)
I know! I'm just getting use to this program man!
So sue me if I suck! I'm still trying to figure out how to delete the Friggin' pic, Dude!
Zack (edited Aug 7, 2005)
No one said you suck. We were mentioning specific problems with the picture, and not to rub them in your face but to help you understand what you are doing wrong, so as to improve.

I think the policy is that pictures older than 24 hours can't be deleted.

Question: if you're "just getting used to the program," why do you continue to post in the intermediate board?
Shenzi13 (Aug 12, 2005)
Sorry if I made it out like that... And thanks fer pointing out the problems.
I'm experimenting with revision and deletion thing though right now...
And As for that question...I'm stubborn little idiot who is impatient and doesn't seem to like beginner boards...
Don't Ask...It's a family trait.
And before you say anything...I KNOW i should go to the Beginners board and start from there, But I'm getting the Hang intermediate!^^
drawn in 2 hours 12 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Public Boards/Intermediate 
somebody (Jun 23, 2005)
Something Neon...pfft
6 comments – latest 4:
Anna (Jul 2, 2005)
Aww very cool :-) I remember when Cindy and Dan did neon signs. They make for very neat lookin' drawings. Good one!
somebody (Jul 6, 2005)
TY anna. I remember theirs too. Of course theirs were much cooler but this was fun any way. A friend sent me a pic of this and I figured...what the hell. :o)
sincity (Aug 4, 2005)
This is cool. :}
StrawberryPaintbrush (edited Aug 16, 2005)
Aww Sindy this turned out great! I haven't drawn anything for awhile because there is no tablet where I usually am and once you start using a tablet there is no turning back...Hope to see you soon!
drawn in 2 hours 16 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
Menyway (Jun 20, 2005)
I've had this picture in my head for awhile now... This one might take some time to complete but i hope the results will be as good as i imagine them to be!!!

EDIT: I'm puttin this as finished to make room and i dont want to work on this for awhile... i'll finish it in Adobe Photoshop some time..
4 comments – latest 4:
Menyway (edited Jun 22, 2005)
drawn in 3 min
Blah.... *is very tempted to delete* >_<
davincipoppalag (Jun 25, 2005)
Do NOT delete! Go back in and detail this puppy.. it could be really good!
Menyway (Jun 25, 2005)
Thanks Davinci but i'll finish in Photoshop!! I have to take a brake from it or i'll kill the bloody thing!! ^__~ I'll post it in the forums when i am done with it ok??
davincipoppalag (Jun 25, 2005)
ok
drawn in 3 hours 14 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Public Boards/Beginner 
Shenzi13 (Jun 19, 2005)
I really Kinda LOVE THE BACKGROUND ON THIS ONE!!!!!!!
This is probably my best one, too.
I was watching CHICAGO when I made this, and they were at the court.
I love that movie.
Tell meh watcha tink!!!
3 comments – latest 3:
Kenshin (Jun 19, 2005)
I hate the phrase razzle dazzle
Xodiak (Jun 19, 2005)
I love it too! It looks soft, colourful and bright. I love the spherical lights! Great picture. >:)
|XOD|
Shenzi13 (edited Jun 21, 2005)
Hey thanks! I really like the background, But I think Kenshin has a pion on the phrase, Sorta.
I'm gonna do another one only with darker colors. What phrase should I use?
Any Ideas?
drawn in 49 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Shenzi13 (Jun 12, 2005)
This is actually pretty good ,being my first actual shot at oakai faces.
3 comments – latest 3:
renire (Jun 12, 2005)
i love the way you have made it look all misty! ^_^
Shenzi13 (Jun 12, 2005)
Thanks!
I wasn't really Paying Attention.^-^
Xodiak (Jun 14, 2005)
Sweet girl! I like her painted lips. >:)
|XOD|
drawn in 37 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Shenzi13 (Jun 14, 2005)
Okay,
Before anyone jumps to any conclutions,
This is NOT a perverted pic.
This is just a picture of a very beautiful woman waking up from a long nights rest.
This my very first Intermediate, or however you spell it, Picture, so be nice.
Please tell me how you like it.
And note, This isn't very good I'll agree.
S write whatever you want, just be nice.
8 comments – latest 4:
Ceido (Jun 16, 2005)
Don't use the blur tool.
Shenzi13 (Jun 23, 2005)
... Why not?
Xodiak (Jun 23, 2005)
Blur is nice sometimes when blending colours and smoothing out sharp details, but it is impossible to make the edges look smoother by using it. If you use it, the lines will wash out and all the details will be destroyed. You need to use other ways to make lines smoother. <:)
|XOD|
Shenzi13 (Jul 2, 2005)
Ohh..... Thanx!
I'll keep that in mind.
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drawn in 50 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Shenzi13 (Jun 14, 2005)
I made this for Renire.
I tried to make the hands,
honest I did! But I can't do this on
computer. So please forgive the bad paint job.
2 comments – latest 2:
Xodiak (Jun 14, 2005)
She looks very nice! I think you progress. The lines become better. I like her! <:)
|XOD|
Shenzi13 (Jun 14, 2005)
Why thankyou very much!
I hope ya like this Renire!
drawn in 1 hour 3 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
StrawberryPaintbrush (Jun 14, 2005)
Ha! It's boring, I know, get over it.
2 comments – latest 2:
Shenzi13 (Jun 14, 2005)
This is an Awesome sphere!
I love the way you made it so 3D!!
davincipoppalag (Jun 14, 2005)
I think you did it well. The edges are a tad rough on the top side..but the shading and lighting looks good.
drawn in 21 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
 
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