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Shenzi13
(Aug 19, 2005)
I can't say that this is my best piece of work...but i can't say i hate it. If any thing...i like how the eyes came out.^^I'm gonna update soon...hope ya like! |
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Shenzi13
(Aug 16, 2005)
This is my first attempt at a normal human...It's not the best in the world, but I'm now finnished! YAY! I hope ya like!
KH44N (Aug 16, 2005)
WOW! That's all i could think of when i first saw this! I love the colours u used, they look amazing! I can't wait to see this when its all finished!
Shenzi13 (Aug 17, 2005)
That all Depends on if there's anything that I should fix. I'm letting people point it out so I can go bck and fix it.If you see anything or have any ideas or suggestions, coulda tell me please? Thanks! Ad Thankies for the pretty coment!^^ Okay...I am now, FINALLY, finnished with this...
She's a character in my story on fanfiction.net, Of Exile and a love filled Rose. Corny title I know...but it's okay i guess. This is Ravens' cousin, Ritalia. She's the Owner of 'Ritalia's Book Repairs abd Best Buys' Store... I hope you guys like it. |
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Shenzi13
(Aug 7, 2005)
I still need to clean this up a bit I know...But Still like how it came out.Yes...I'm A big BB/Rae shipper. Hope ya like it!^^
hideyourface (Aug 12, 2005)
I think its beginner just because of the pencil used with the blurry stuff, and a lot of the limbs are drawn with the line, and there isn't much shading, and the anatomy isn't quite right yet.
Shenzi13 (Aug 13, 2005)
Very Funny man...And thanks memo!^^ Where have you seen the pairings? I hear they're becoming more recent as well.
deleted34235 (Aug 19, 2005)
I love Raven's hair...I also love the background!!! nice drawing!!!!!
Shenzi13 (Sep 3, 2005)
Thanks dudes!^^Thankies to all! |
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Shenzi13
(Aug 9, 2005)
Yep...Corny, I know...I don't like the lights at all by any means.I hope you do though...^^
friend (Aug 9, 2005)
Very cool, i was gunna draw somehting like this but this woulda been better! |
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Shenzi13
(Aug 7, 2005)
...Don't ask...YAY!!!!!!! I'm finally finnished!
Sick, I know, But I like how the burns came out. Hope ya like!
Xodiak (Aug 8, 2005)
Oh my... she is burning... Is she a witch burned by evil priests? Poor lady... The burns are drawn really well. Xod wishes she would be saved! She is beautiful. |:(|XOD| |
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Shenzi13
(Jun 23, 2005)
This isn't the best pic I've ever done, but I guess it's not the worst either huh?The necklace she's wearing around her neck was givin to her by BeastBoy. In case ya can't read it, it says "will love u 4evr" I didn't have a lot of room on the chain, so I shortened it out... and the heart in the center has a black rose, and it's the symbol showing "love". I didn't actualy write it. Okay...I think I'm finnished. If not and you see anything I need to work on, Coulda please point it out?
Thanx! Enjoy!
Childlike_Vampire (Aug 7, 2005)
Well, it looks like you could stay within the lines on her clothes, unless it's supposed to be seethrough-ish then nevermind. Also, this is a really great fkn start, why don't you give it shading and a few more details like that necklace. I really like the colors you used, and her boobs, lol.
Zack (Aug 7, 2005)
The lines need to be cleaned up (right now they're jagged and pixelated) and there currently is no shading whatsoever. If you decide not to shade it, you will need to significantly improve the lineart (including adding more lines for interest and depth, and using different line thicknesses) to bring this up to intermediate level quality. As it stands now, it is not intermediate level work.
Shenzi13 (Aug 11, 2005)
thanks man...I don't know how to clean it up after claiming it DONE though...I'll keep that in mind though. |
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Shenzi13
(Jun 30, 2005)
I hate the Background,but i love the body effects...I had a little trouble with it, But now i just figured out how to the layer effect!! YAAAAAAAAYYYYY!!!!!
Zack (Jul 1, 2005)
In this case hide was giving an honest critique, which has nothing to do with how 'kind' he is. The proportions in this picture are off. If you ask me, though, the overuse of the straight line tool is a bigger problem. People, especially women, are curvy.
Shenzi13 (Aug 7, 2005)
I know! I'm just getting use to this program man!So sue me if I suck! I'm still trying to figure out how to delete the Friggin' pic, Dude!
Zack (edited Aug 7, 2005)
No one said you suck. We were mentioning specific problems with the picture, and not to rub them in your face but to help you understand what you are doing wrong, so as to improve.I think the policy is that pictures older than 24 hours can't be deleted. Question: if you're "just getting used to the program," why do you continue to post in the intermediate board?
Shenzi13 (Aug 12, 2005)
Sorry if I made it out like that... And thanks fer pointing out the problems.I'm experimenting with revision and deletion thing though right now... And As for that question...I'm stubborn little idiot who is impatient and doesn't seem to like beginner boards... Don't Ask...It's a family trait. And before you say anything...I KNOW i should go to the Beginners board and start from there, But I'm getting the Hang intermediate!^^ |
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Shenzi13
(Jun 19, 2005)
I really Kinda LOVE THE BACKGROUND ON THIS ONE!!!!!!!This is probably my best one, too. I was watching CHICAGO when I made this, and they were at the court. I love that movie. Tell meh watcha tink!!!
Kenshin (Jun 19, 2005)
I hate the phrase razzle dazzle
Xodiak (Jun 19, 2005)
I love it too! It looks soft, colourful and bright. I love the spherical lights! Great picture. >:)|XOD|
Shenzi13 (edited Jun 21, 2005)
Hey thanks! I really like the background, But I think Kenshin has a pion on the phrase, Sorta.I'm gonna do another one only with darker colors. What phrase should I use? Any Ideas? |
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Shenzi13
(Jun 12, 2005)
This is actually pretty good ,being my first actual shot at oakai faces. |
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Shenzi13
(Jun 14, 2005)
Pretty self explanitory.I messed up pretty bad on it, but i'm proud of how the eyes came out. Hey, it could of been worse!!! I don't know how, But i just know! |
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Her name is Terresia and I'm still looking for a possition for her in the story. But she's a relative of Raven's
I really kinda loke how this one came out. I hope you do too!^^
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