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NOVEMBER93 (May 2, 2006)

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Maiko (May 3, 2006)

one of those white ones :D
the dots are a figment of my imagination.

Akechi456 (May 4, 2006)

You're getting a lot better Oomily~ :3

NOVEMBER93 (edited Jun 1, 2010)

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NOVEMBER93 (Apr 8, 2006)

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Ana-hime (edited Apr 9, 2006)

You're drawing the eyes too high, make sure to leave space for the forehead. I'll admit this is better than your previous submissions, but you should try practicing the face, and try drawing a full-body shot.

xiang (edited Apr 9, 2006)

Not to sound mean, but I decided to help you out with some critique:
http://i2.tinypic.com/v2tyex.jpg
Based on the way the face is pointing to, the mouth would look better on the other side of the face ( that's a mouth, right? =__=;). The eyes are too high and spaced out, and the neck is too thick. D:
I hope I helped

NOVEMBER93 (edited Jun 1, 2010)

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NOVEMBER93 (Apr 20, 2006)

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NOVEMBER93 (edited Jun 1, 2010)
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NOVEMBER93 (Apr 10, 2006)

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Deformed (Apr 10, 2006)

I agree with Shoebox. You have gotten better. Just work on some backrounds.

DoOp (Apr 10, 2006)

an improve~ment =)

some crits *don't bite me*
~ the head's a bit too flat on top, give her more of a skull =)
~you could have hair covering one side of the face, just draw the eyes under neath, to show they're there for practice *it's what I do, and it looks..weird... ._.;;;;;;;*
~ sketchy Back ground! I hate my backgrounds, i hate backgrounds in general! @_@;;; so work on backgrounds AFTER you get used to drawin people and stuff <3
~shadings a bit dull, add som pizazzzzzz <3<3<3

that's all i have to say ^_^ hope to see more of your work! <3

Gigandas (Apr 10, 2006)

I have to say, this is what I like to see around here. People trying to help each other out instead of trashing peoples' pics and hurting their feelings in the process. But hey, that's just me...

SneakyWalter (Apr 14, 2006)

Me too, Gig.

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NOVEMBER93 (Apr 8, 2006)

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Akechi456 (Apr 9, 2006)

Hey~You copier~You got this from the design of Rocket Dive hide-sama I drew on our collab.I recognize the hair,the glasses and the shirt. =.=

NOVEMBER93 (edited Jun 1, 2010)

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xiang (Apr 10, 2006)

Covering one eye on the drawing with hair is a really bad habit to get into. D:

NOVEMBER93 (Jun 4, 2006)
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i felt like i needed to fix it...even though it still looks bad

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NOVEMBER93 (Mar 14, 2006)

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Shanghai (Apr 8, 2006)

what are you, bob ross? Because you know that you can move mountains, according to him. XP

Ana-hime (Apr 8, 2006)

I think you should move the eye down, since it looks like she has no forehead.

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NOVEMBER93 (Feb 14, 2006)

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April94 (Feb 19, 2006)

i guess that you did end up rounding out the edges, now didn't you

NOVEMBER93 (edited Jun 1, 2010)

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NOVEMBER93 (Feb 28, 2006)

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kristine (edited Mar 18, 2006)

Which i am...but that's beside the point.
All i was trying to say was that maybe you should spend some more time on your pictures and actually try to improve your proportions. If you know whats wrong with it, try and fix it, dont just ignore it and the people seeing it too.
11 minutes on a picture is not long enough to begin to improve. It may seem like a long time when you are actually in the applet, but if you only spend said amount on time on something, there's going to be things wrong with it, and we arent afraid to point them out.

DoOp (Mar 20, 2006)

Kristine ._. you are not an idiot, you are a sexy genuis :D wooh

sorry november93, but i gatta agree 100% with kristine ^^;

NOVEMBER93 (edited Jun 1, 2010)

Oh my gosh, I was so stupid and definitely out of line back then. I honestly and whole-heartedly apologize to everyone, especially kristine. I'm so so sorry. If anyone's the idiot, it was certainly me.