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well *I* for one think it totally rocks. The sky? the texture looks like clouds turned pink (my favorite color!) and you did an awesome job on the water lighting. The one thing that looks like it could possibly be improved is maybe you could have smoothed down the sky's colors in the sunset juuuust a little bit. but if you did it now, it would be too difficult and you would probably end up destroying it...

RabidMalikFanGirl (edited Mar 1, 2003)

I really like the texturing :) It kinda looks like the sea melts into the sky. It also has a sort of 3D-ish feel.

Queech (edited Mar 1, 2003)

I love the water coloring effects. It's really well done.

Public Boards/Intermediate

Fencing

WerefoxLeBlanc (Feb 27, 2003)

Marrow fencing. Well, practicing it at least... you wouldn't fence without proper protection. Probably SCA fencing, since Olympic style fencing doesn't allow for main gauche and his Epee has quillions on it.

Probably gonna edit this sometime. Lines look better than I usually do.

EDIT: Cleaned it up a bit.

6 comments – latest 4:

WerefoxLeBlanc (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Well.... thank you. Much appreciated.

Hm... I'm gonna clean it up.

Knockoff (edited Feb 27, 2003)

This is cool. Looks better now!

Kazukie (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Very nice! You did a good job cleaning it up!

quintessence (edited Feb 28, 2003)

I like the motion in your art. *nod nod*

Public Boards/Beginner

Liiittle. Hehe.

quintessence (Feb 27, 2003)

I wanted to try drawing little Trowa from Episode Zero... so here he is. *sweatdrop*

10 comments – latest 4:

RabidMalikFanGirl (edited Mar 1, 2003)

I think you could do it!!! I luv your GW drawings!!!

quintessence (edited Mar 24, 2003)

*blush... mumble*
Thank you. Mayhap I'll do more.

darkk_angel (edited Mar 25, 2003)

OH MY GOD!!! YOU FRIGGIN ROCK, MAN!!!! I LOOOOOOOOOVE TROWA!! no name... ehhehe that was funny.....

rosalyn (edited Jul 18, 2003)

O M G! How Cute!!!!!!!! *nodds*

Blurry furry.

Eggie (Feb 27, 2003)

I know a lot of people here like cat people (understatement) so I drew Mr.blurry as one. Enjoy.

4 comments – latest 4:

Knockoff (edited Feb 27, 2003)

I like how you shade.

WerefoxLeBlanc (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Actaully, I eat kittens.
...
Inside joke. Never mind.

It's kind of fun to mess around with your charactors, isn't it?

quintessence (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Hehe! *gives mr. blurry a catnip cookie*

Kazukie (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Aww! Kinda creepy though.. =\

Storm brewing

Shrouded_Figure (Feb 27, 2003)

A storm is a' brewin'. Lol Kinda crappy, but, I tried.

4 comments – latest 4:

Samwise (edited Feb 27, 2003)

The sky looks cool ^^

Knockoff (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Yea I like the sky!

Kazukie (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Neee I wish we would have another storm! I miss summer sooo much I could cry! Winter has lasted too long...

Knockoff (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Yea i mis summer too.

Public Boards/Intermediate

cry cry

coffeejelly (Feb 27, 2003)

this is the fifth picture i drew today (;_;)
i just couldn't complete my pictures X'D
it gets very frustrating, in the end i drew a super simple pic

5 comments – latest 4:

Knockoff (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Yea i like this a lot. I like the rays of light and the shading.

Kazukie (edited Feb 27, 2003)

I like the shine on her hair. =]

mauvemalady (edited Mar 6, 2003)

Rays of light! Hurrah!

Tesia-chan (edited Apr 7, 2003)

Wow, so pretty. Warm fuzzies just lookin' at it.

Gotta dance!

WerefoxLeBlanc (Feb 26, 2003)

Music seems to be a prevalent element in my art. Hm.

Well, you cought Marrow dancing. He likes to put on his headphones and dance like a fool when he's alone, but he's too shy and insecure to do so in front of anyone else. He goes to clubs with friends but never goes out onto the floor.

I like the BG. Lyrics by Garbage, "I'm only happy when it rains"

7 comments – latest 4:

WerefoxLeBlanc (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Well, what's the point of feedback if you don't get anything from it? Personally, Even ONE precise comment ("Like your coloring" or whatever) is infinitly more satisfying than 1000 "Tha's nice" comments. I know it's nice. I wanna know why.

As for my style... How much more vague can you get? Might as well say "I like the cut of your jib."

UppityCracker (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Ok, you want a critique? Here we go..
The character design is weak, it is sloppy and unpolished. If you really want to define the character do a few detail sketches of body parts, such as the face. Your "style" needs to be defined more.. I mean is your character floating in space or standing? Space is very important in placing the whole scene.
What IS good about it though is that you have a form and an idea, and I'm sure in your mind it is alot clearer.
Just keep practicing man, practice makes perfect. Don't let the shit that I say get to you. Take it as constructive criticism
I don't mean to judge it too much, and art is art, if you mean it to be a sketch then forget what I say. Keep practicing on human form, like how a person stands and the movement of legs and arms. I know my stuff isnt perfect and need to work on it alot more.. ok, i'll stop now.

WerefoxLeBlanc (edited Feb 27, 2003)

Dont' let it get to me? Lessons already learned. That which does not kill me, et all.

If I DIDNT want a crit, I wouldn't post. Thanks.

darkk_angel (edited Mar 28, 2003)

Good idea, but the lineart is a tad bit messy.... if you cleaned it up a tad bit and added more shadows and color to the picture, and a better background it would be awesome.